stage notes: Comedia Corta en un Acto

Comedia Corta en un Acto
lunes, septiembre 03, 2007

-SE LEVANTA EL TELÓN-

Mesa de póquer entre amigos, arriba en el laboratorio. $100 arriba de la mesa, repartidos en monedas de $0,50; $1; $2 y algunas inflitradas de $5 y $10. Eran tres los que jugaban. Caen dos compañeras, hacen barullo, no pasa nada. Hasta que pasa.

[Entra el limpiador, del que nadie sabe el nombre. Se llama Patricio en realidad. Joven, barba, pinta de grunge-rocker]

Patricio: - ¡Hola muchaaaachos!
Damián: - ¿Qué dice la banda?
[los otros hacen mutis]
P: - ¿Qué juegan?
Sebastián: - Póquer, Texas Hold'em. ¿Te sumás?
P: - Nah, dejen que yo no sé. ¿Los jodo si limpio ahora?
Los tres jugadores al unísono: ¡No, no! ¡Dale tranqui!

[Entra la adscripta, a la que llamaremos Leticia. Trae una cara de orto considerable. Mutis general, caras de pánico por parte de todos los presentes.]

D [fingíendo aplomo]: - ¿En qué andá Leti?
Leti [con notable enojo al ver las cartas, y caminándo hacia las mesas]: -Basta. ¡Dejen de hacer eso ya mismo! [viendo el pozo apostado] Mmm, bueno, me voy a llevar unos pesos para la reparación de... eh... ustedes saben. [mira al techo, pausa, toma monedas del pozo de José, que la mira y le retruca indignado. Se retiravelozmente acompañada de un José indignado]

-CAE EL TELÓN-

posted by Diego @ 7:08 p. m.,

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